Final images

I think my images work well together, the repetition of harsh tones and dramatic lighting create a well flowing sequence. Individually though I don't think all of the images are strong because of individual reasons of their own. As a series I think these images represent the 'Spying', 'Thriller' story that I had in mind. In terms of the story being told I think I could have shown this clearer by using the same time frame between each event in each image for example the time frame between images 3 and 4 is almost instantaneous but the time frame of the events between images 13 and 14 would have lasted longer. I haven't kept a mutual time gap between each image, some of the images seem to 'skip' and event before arriving at the next one. I will ask someone who I haven't told my story to, to look at this series of images and tell me what they think the story is, if they tell me a story similar to the one I was trying to represent then I will know if this series of images have gone to plan.